Aleatha

I saw the stars,
They blinked to me,
I know that...
They are on my side.

And I don't want to loose this,
And I don't want to change,
And I don't want to go,
I wish that I could stay.

And I don't want to loose this,
And I don't want to change,
And I don't want to see...
How they are falling down...
Down...
Down...

I thought that I had...
The sky full of stars,
I thought that I could,
Get to them, close by...

And I don't want to loose this,
And I don't want to change,
And I don't want to go,
I wish that I could stay.

And I don't want to loose this,
And I don't want to change,
And I don't want to see...
How they are falling down...
Down...
Down...

Now I know it's not good,
Now I know it is wrong,
To try and with stars,
Go along...

They are distant,
They are really cold,
They don't want to see,
That you know...

The Silence,
The Will,
The Wrath,
The Pain...

Down...

The Strength,
The Fear
The Illness,
You'll see...

Down...

Dzisiaj taki sobie tekścik raczej do piosenki... Pewnie ostatnio was zanudzam moją łamaną angielszczyzną, ale jak nie wstawię tego tutaj, to pewnie zgubię.

Przeczytałem, ale ni to mnie grzeje, ni to ziębi. Ogółem tęsknię nieco za Twoimi tekstami po polsku. Podoba mi się to, jak dobierasz tutaj rymy - sam po angielsku tego nie umiem, ale jeśli chodzi o mnie... to nie to.

Tematyka mi się podoba, rymy są świetne. No cóż, Nalf, trzymasz poziom Laugh

Tylko zgodzę się z @Matpollo - mi także brakuje Twoich polskich wierszy.

Po polsku toć to wysiłek! Ale cóż... Próbuję coś skrobać na konkurs... Happy

Dzięki.

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Matpollo

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